Hello, @nubalathenerd887 I'm cazendos and I'm your reviewer. Even though I'm not your original pick, I hope you find this helpful.

Book title: Konoha High School
Author: @nubalathenerd887

Plot line:5/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling: 4/10
Cover: 4/5
Blurb:3/5
Plot twists: 0/10 (None yet)
Total: 26/40 (65%)

~Straight to it, the cover is a bit blurry but still has that high school vibe to it, nice!
The blurb is fine, slightly confusing because of the grammar but overall does bring out what the book is about.
There are quite a few grammar mistakes and there were many parts where the speech marks were missing, making it difficult to understand.  Like this part: Oops sorry my bad stuttered hinata before letting sakura go. You can change it to: "Oops, sorry my bad!" stuttered Hinata before letting Sakura go.

So far there's not much of a plot yet, but hopefully there will be one in the later chapters. You could add some depth to the characters in your story, making your readers feel more attached to them. You could say one of your characters have a sudden memory of a dark/happier/anything really past. Here's a link to a website that give tips about character depth, hope it helps!
> https://www.kristenkoster.com/7-creative-ways-to-create-character-depth/

This book only has one chapter so far and there's not much to say. It has potential for drama or even plot twists if that's what you are going for. This may not really stand out as there are many books and stories about high school related stuff be it about people from movies or their imagination or even from anime, but it would be better if you added some twists  to it in your later chapters to make your readers feel more drawn to it :D

That's about it, be sure to work on your grammar remember to add speech marks (it really helps), it's great working on this review as it's my first one haha, I hope that you found this review useful. The part with a "~" is about the marks, if you're uncertain about something, be sure to reach out to me and comment it, I'll try my best to help. Don't give up, you can do it!

One last thing, I'm really sorry regarding the delay of your review, since I have a really busy schedule and had a lot of other things to do in my life. I had fun making this review and I hope you like it!