The Death Of A Bachelor
Hello! I'm cazendos a.k.a Lee and I'm your reviewer :)
Book title: The Death of a Bachelor
Author: rikaaraji468
Plot line: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Grammar/Spelling: 9.5/10
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 5/5
Plot twists: 2/10
Total:39.5/50
A note about the marks above, I have only read one chapter, sorry.
~Even though I only read one chapter of your book, I have already fallen in love with it. I'll definitely continue reading this on my main account after I'm done with this review. 1000% will recommend this book to anyone who wants a recommendation. This book is about royalty and nobles (and romance...?), which sort of reminds me of the Falling Kingdoms series (which I have read countless times). The plot line is awe-inspiring! I simply love it.
The characters... Elena and her family, Kieran and his family, I'm already attached to them.There are one or two grammar mistakes here and there, nothing much to worry about.
The cover is okay but maybe you could expand the image so that there's no black parts (it'll be more appealing, well to me at least); because of the black parts it feels like it's very empty.
What can I even say about the blurb, it's perfect.
I don't have much points to give since I've only read one chapter😅 And that, I think will wrap up everything I have to say about the marks I have given. You have so much talent as a writer and I do hope you'll write another book, I'll be waiting! And I honestly don't have much criticism to give, the first chapter is already perfect to me; I have not read such a good first chapter like this in so long, I don't know if I have mentioned this or not but I love this book everybody who is reading this please check out The Death of a Bachelor. I have truly enjoyed reading this book and reviewing it too.
The part with a "~" is about the marks, if you're uncertain about something, be sure to reach out to me and comment it, I'll try my best to help. Don't give up, you can do it! Sorry again for the delay on your review. Good job on the book, keep up with the good work and hope this helped :D
Ganbatte to all the authors out there!
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