Reviewed by -forever-summer-

"Invisible Strings" by jnyyaa

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Cover: 7/10

The cover of your book looks simple, neat, and elegant at the same time. The borders you had used for the cover seem oddly placed. It would be better if it was arranged well. Also, it seems like a bit cut off at the top too.

The tiger on the cover is beautifully placed. But the cover feels empty otherwise. You could add a quote or a line from your book. It would make your book more appealing and interesting for the readers. It would make them choose it over all the other books.

Also, you can add your name as the author instead of your username. It would bring you to the notice of your reader.

The font used for your book cover is great and goes well with the tiger and the border you used.

Title: 7/10

I like the title of your book, it is nice and suits your book well. But then, it is a very common title. There are a lot of books on Wattpad with the same or similar titles. It will make your book seem like it is one book among the others with the same old plot. It would make it seem less interesting to the reader.

It would have been better if you had gone for a more unique and less-used title, which would suit your book.

Blurb: 5/10

The blurb of your book was good, but it didn't do your book justice. It feels like you didn't put any effort into your blurb. It seems like it is written hastily and without much thought.

Blurbs are the first piece of your writing that the readers come across before even deciding on reading your book. So it must be well written, interesting, give enough information about the book, and also should be as mistakes-free as possible. A good blurb must contain all the basic information a reader needs to know before starting but also without letting on more than what is needed for the suspense to last. It must be as mistake-free as possible for the readers to be intrigued and attracted to the book. It must be compelling for them to choose this book over others.

In the first paragraph of your blurb.

"he only chose the circus to be with his beloved tiger."

There was no mention of Cali. And suddenly it is mentioned in the next line that attacks and disappears. It is weird and confusing that Cali attacks.

Instead of just randomly introducing Cali, you could add the name in the very first sentence.

"he only chose the circus to be with his beloved tiger, Cali."

It wouldn't be an abrupt introduction for Cali. It kinda of makes the sentence complete.

Also, in the first line of the second paragraph,

"With the new aerialist from russia, Aadav thinks to have found a clue."

'Russia' must be capitalized in your first line. Also, it would have been better if you had mentioned it was Nikita. Because Nikita was abruptly mentioned in the next sentence.

"With the new aerialist from Russia, Nikita in town, Aadav seems to think that he has found a clue for the mysterious disappearance of Cali."

This one gives a proper introduction to Nikita and also about Aadav's feelings towards him. It gives a glimpse of the book without diving into the details and giving away the whole plot.

These are minor mistakes that when rectified will make your book more interesting and will help your book reach more readers.

Your blurb wasn't cohesive enough to pique the interest of the readers. Each sentence seemed abruptly placed and didn't seem to go well together. Simple editing will make your blurb better and more interesting.

Plot: 9/10

In short, your plot revolves around Aadav, Nikita, and Cali. The emotional torment they go through together after Cali escapes and how their past and trauma had shaped them. How they both help each other when needed.

The plot of your book was different from the books I've read and reviewed so far. It was beautiful and unique. Making your book a bit more interesting and refreshing. As the story progresses, you show the readers bits and pieces of the different sides of the character that made your book more enjoyable.

Creativity: 10/10

The plot and trope you chose were great and interesting. I loved how you kept the readers engaged and intrigued by your words. By the end of every chapter, the need to read more increased than to put down the book.

The writers are said to be the greatest manipulators, who can make the readers love the character and hate the character at the same time. You did a great job in getting the emotions out of your readers by your words.

Writing flow/pace: 10/10

The pace of the book is really important because that is one of the deciding factors whether the readers will continue reading the book or not and also whether they are enjoying the reading of the book or not.

A constant pace of the storyline is important for the readers. Either it can be a slow burn or a fast-paced story. For a mystery and romance novel like yours, you have adapted a perfect pace for the book. There weren't any noticeable abrupt pace changes in your book.

Writing Style: 9/10

Every writer has a unique writing style that will make their book more interesting, different, and enjoyable than the other books with the same old plot. Your writing style was apt for the pace you had chosen for your book. Great job on that.

Setting and Character Development: 7/10

I feel like you could have worked a bit on explaining the setting more. At the beginning of your book, the settings were given a very detailed explanation compared to the last. Though I was able to understand the storyline, it would have been better to have imagined it than just understand it. It would give better flow and enjoyment for the readers.

But I loved how well you expressed each emotion. It was very well written and I loved it. It helped a lot with the character development. The readers were able to relate well with the characters and were able to see how well they developed. How they slowly became closer, even if they were in denial. And how desperate they became to search for Cali and how much Aadav worried about the tigers more than themselves.

Grammar, Spelling, and punctuation: 8/10

There weren't any spelling or punctuation errors. You did a great job on that part. But then I found very few grammatical errors. There weren't many. Only two to three mistakes can be rectified while editing your book. Other than that it was great on this front.

Genre relevance and Enjoyment: 9/10

Your book was a mystery and Romance novel. It suited the genre very well. It was well written to develop in the mystery genre.

The book was enjoyable and well-written. I would love to read more about the other side characters too. I would like to see the interaction between other characters, Aadav and Nikita. There were very few and I would like to see some more.

Total: 81/100

Your book seems good and interesting as far as I have read. It was hard to even put it down to write this review.

But then, I felt like you could do better in the first impression part. Your book is too good and I felt like if the first impression part - the book cover, title, and blurb, had been good it would have been one of the best books I have ever read. It would also help in a lot more readers for you and increase your number of readers.

You can try and perfect the position of the border in your cover, also you can add your name instead of your username to make your cover look better and interesting.

And it would be great if you work on your blurb a bit more. Your prologue was very well written. The way you explained the smallest details, how cohesive and beautifully written it was. It was too good. All the other chapters were great too. So, it felt unfair to your book that you didn't take much effort in the blurb. I apologize, If I had come off harsh on those parts but it would be one of the most perfectly and well written books if it had a better blurb. Other than that it is a great read.

These are just my personal opinions and areas that I think you should work on. Please keep writing and reading books. All the best!