Reviewer: Blazé
Client: minnie_mxchi_
Title: Meant To Be
Review type: Public

[PS: Reviewed till hapter 18]

Cover: 3/5
The cover doesn't really go with the story. Though it vibes some vibes and is pretty, it would be better to use Jimin in the cover, like you've used in banners. I think that would be much better than the current one.

Title: 3/5
So far, it doesn't seem appropriate for the story, maybe later it would make some sense, but right now it doesn't really make much sense. It's still attracting the audience, I think.

Blurb: 4.5/5
The content is perfect and attracts audience. Although you may make it look more visually presentable than it is now.

Plot: 4/5
The plot isn't very complex, though there seem to be some hidden parts to the story, which is a plus point. The concept is not very unique but still carried out the plot beautifully with some very interesting events.

Execution of the plot: 4.5/5
It was very nice. You presented everything beautifully and I could connect with the story very well. The chapters were short so it was more interesting to read the story.

The idea of the story: 4/5
It's simple with some complicated coincidences; a story of two people who are meant to be. The idea is quite enticing and emotional to begin with, and you've maintained the atmosphere throughout the chapters so far.

Originality: 3/5
Stories like this are quite common and yours is not really unique, but what actually makes it different is the way you created the events. The small things that you added did make your story different from others.

Writing Style: 4/5
The writing style is mostly good. The lower case somehow adds to the atmosphere of the book I don't know how. The narrative is appropriate as well. But look out or some errors, instead of third person, firt person speech is used at places.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 9/10
There aren't particularly any grammatical errors, but some typos occasionally. The vocabulary is good too. You've kept it simple and that is a good choice for this kind of story. It fits the story and vibes.

Presentation: 4/5
The visual presentation is pretty. You've used banners and dividers along with some pictures for the header of the chapter. About the textual presentation, even without the decoration it's very pretty. You might decorate the chapter names though, it looks a little boring.

Flow & Pace: 4.5/5
The flow and pace both are fine. It's not like the story feels rushed or too slow. The transitions do seem a tad bit distorted though, like from one chapter to other, sometimes though.

Structure: 4/5
The structure is pretty fine, both the events and the plot twists. Though sometimes they aren't very well written, so it creates some space between the reader and the story.

Literary Skills: 7.5/10
There aren't very much literary skills used. There are some phrases a bit wrongly used too. The exposition lacks at some places too. You have described things, but at times, it isn't enough. Then the flashbacks, they aren't well connected to the verse.

Characters: 4/5
Though the characters are signified, they aren't well put in. You should describe their characteristics, personality, and input some info about them wherever they make appearance. In short, the character sketch is needed.

Emotions & Development: 7/10
The emotions are developed uniformly well, but at times it fluctuates. The pace is lost and the emotions go off track. Also, some actions that may cause some severity are written as if they're not a big deal. You should focus on some realistic situations too.

Reader's Enjoyment: 9/10
I enjoyed the story very much. Even though there were some faults, it didn't really hinder in the enjoyment and quality reading.

Total: 79/100

Strengths and Weakness:
The strength is the writing style and the storyline, which is quite enticing in a very simple way, and the weakness is the errors and lack of character development.

Final Note: Considering that you've been a writer for about two years now, I'd expect you to be more descriptive with the characters. Also, since you're rewritng this book, I think there's still cope to improve the faults and it won't be much of a hassle to do so. I wish you luck and hope you write more good stories like this. If my words anyhow offended you, I apologize but that wasn't my intention. And I hope my review helped. Thank you!