Reviewer: Blazé
Client: itz_army_bish
Title: Thoughts Turned Into Tokens of Beauty
Review type: Public

[PS: Reviewed till 27 parts]

Cover: 5/5
The cover is pretty and attractive. The background image is well chosen too and the fonts are also very pretty.

Book Title: 4/5
The title however isn't very enticing, as it seems to me. It's good though, but not striking the urge to just open the book and read it.

Blurb: 3.5/5
You shouldn't put one of your poems in the blurb. Rather write some quotes or lines about the theme of your poems in the book or something introducing your poems. That would also attract the audience and drive them in.

Poem Titles: 2/5
For a poem, the title is the first thing to drive a reader in. Your titles aren't captivating and somehow feel random. You may use some unique words and phrases for your poems.

Theme of the Poems: 6/10
One of the very common theme in all your poems is love. Whether it be fatherly love or romantic love. Some of your poems like "Lying" doesn't involve love, but rather the tideous soul. The themes aren't bad, but you must put it to good use for it to be just as worthy. You've not put your touch in the themes and it feels reused.

Originality: 3.5/5
The words and the poems held your very own originality, no doubt. However, the emotions and the message conveyed weren't anything new.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 8/10
There aren't really any grammatical errors, nor are there any speech errors. The vocabulary is simple and easy to understand, that's good. But in some poems, a little complex vocabulary is needed. Not everywhere does the simplicity work.

Presentation: 5/5
In this criteria, you've done an absolutely great job. The poems are both visually and textually enticing.

Poetic Skills: 8/15
You did write the poems simply and beautifully but you lack some poetic skills. You used the poetic devices, but you did not make the worth out of it. Also, some poems are single liners; you should know that poems consist of minimum 4 lines. Those lines you've written aren't poems but rather quotes and statements. You should consider adding more lines to it.

Structure: 7/10
The structuring of your poems is mostly fine, but at some places, the flow is suddenly lost. Also, you should divide the long poems into verses and provide their own values to each verse. That would frame and provide more meaning to your poems.

Emotional Involvement: 11/15
The emotional involvement overall in the poems wasn't very credible. I won't say I didn't feel the emotional meaning of the words, but those emotions weren't anything newly generated from your poems. Those were the old reused emotions in already existing poems. If you try to mould your words in a different way, that new feeling could be generated.

Reader's Enjoyment: 7/10
The enjoyment was fine. I can't say that I was really hooked to it, but it was still enjoyable. You tried to portray deep feelings, but the words were left light that did not make a strong impact.

Total: 70/100

Strengths and Weakness:
The strength is the presentation skills and your simplicity of words. The weakness however is your choice of themes; the depth of the themes doesn't go well with simplicity.

Final Note: Anyway, I'll say that you've written nice poems. It's not at all easy to write a poem, and since you did it must have taken a lot of efforts. I hope my words did not offend you in any way, and if they did I apologise for it wasn't my intention at all. I hope my review helped. Thank you!