Perfectly Stolen by cyaneux

Reviewer: june_berrin

Thank you so much for giving me the chance and trust to review your story.

❥ Title: A unique and well-suited title. It can tell a story of its own and it suits the romantic genre of the book and helps set the mood of the story.

❥ Cover: I have to say the cover looks marvellous. It has been designed really well. The colour scheme felt cool and magical. The title is readable and everything has been done perfectly. Hats off to the designer.

❥ Blurb: The blurb had all the information it needed. But there were some issues. First off, I suggest that you break the blurb into 2 stanzas. From the part, 'Moving to Manila...' break the paragraph into two so it is easier to read. There were also a few past tenses and present tense mixups in between which can be corrected by proofreading. I think you need to start the blurb with a dialogue from the story or like 'Evie Andrada never thought that trying out in an exchange program would be... ' something like that to hook the readers in. After writing it, separate it with a sentence breaker or **** then the original blurb can be written. Also, if possible apply a connection to the title 'Perfectly Stolen', in the blurb so the blurb doesn't seem foreign to the title and cover.

❥ Reader Attraction: The cover and title both paired up together made an excellent duo. I actually wasn't going to check this book until I have finished all the others. But the cover and the title caught my eye and pulled me in, the moment I saw it.

❥ Conclusion: The book looks like a very successful well published one. I think you need to work on that blurb a bit more. And about the rest of the sections, I don't know how it is since it is in Tagalog, so this is the end of your review and hopes you find it useful!

Best Wishes 🌻

NOTE: please request a review from our reviewer, Claire. She can read Tagalog and has offered to review it instead.