《June》Solus Snippets
Solus Snippets by Katopark
Reviewer: june_berrin
Thank you so much for giving me the chance and the trust to review your story.
I really enjoyed it.
❥ Cover/Title: An awesome cover which was really attractive and eye-catching. The colour scheme was really good, it helps set the mood of the story. The title went along very well with the cover. The title alone draws a lot of attraction as it is quite unique. The cover gives out a very mystical and mysterious vibe. In the cover, I like how Taehyung was positioned inside a mirror and at first, I thought the blurred figure on the side was a girl. But with a closer look, I got on. The cover concept was done quite creatively and the title was beautiful and readable. The only thing was that Taehyung's eye looks a bit weird, I am not sure but it feels a bit different. Overall, the cover along with the title is a great duo.
❥ Blurb: The blurb began with a beautiful title which will help hook the readers into the blurb. The aesthetics matched the cover and title. I love how the blurb was written in the first-person narrative. Usually, the ones I find in Wattpad that have been done in the same narrative are quite crappy and not really good. But this one seems to be an exception. It helps give the readers a bit of Taehyung's character and the first-person narrator's thoughts which further spikes curiosity into the minds of the readers enticing them to read the story. The blurb has helped set the premise of the story and has given the readers a gist of the plot.
❥ Grammar and Vocabulary: The grammar was perfect and no major issues were spotted! Also, an amazing thesaurus has been used in the story which has helped to enhance your writing style and describe them better.
❥ Reader's Enjoyment: The story was highly enjoyable for a reader, especially with the help of our great death! That character has really evoked the interest of readers even before the plot has begun.
❥ Conclusions: A marvellous story! It is comparatively far easier to come up with ideas than to write and portray them in the proper and specific manner which suits them the best, especially a plot like yours! The story has a lot of potential and I loved it a lot! And I also apologise for the delay that has occurred and I am grateful for your patience. And I apologise beforehand if I have misinterpreted something or hurt you in any way because it was never in my intention to do so. So, hope you have a great day/night ahead!
Best Wishes 🌻
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