Reviewer: june_berrin
Written by: dhanyxa

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story.

It was really an amazing story and I have enjoyed it a lot! Great work!

❥ Title: The title is downright direct to the story, it gives the readers a gist of what to type of story it is going to be. I think it would grab the attention of the readers too.

❥ Cover: The cover needs to be improved a lot. Kiara's picture looks a bit a badly positioned plus the picture is in a different filter compared to Alia's and Sara's picture. Plus the red background doesn't really suit the cover.

Other than that the cover along with the title helps the reader know more about the story plot. Every needed component is there but I think it could be improved a bit more.

❥ Blurb: Actually, there is nothing to comment here since you haven't written a blurb, instead just a very short description. But I think you need to write one, so that the readers would be enticed to read your story.

❥ Story line: I love the story line, I love how each of them where different and the three pairing was superb (They all look so cute together!). The story line was common but it was still interested as you have managed to lay out a lot of cliffhangers towards the end. But I want you to notice that some chapters felt really short while others felt longer.

❥ Characters: I have spotted a lot name issues. You have mixed up the old names and the new names of the characters. For example, in the chapter were Aryan discover Yash cheating on Avni, you write Aryan's name as Chirag. Have I not read the cast chapter I would have been extremely confused, so please go through it.

Also, all the character's has been well-developed and portrayed. But I think you lack a bit in expressing the emotions of the characters, you just need to improve that area a bit more and everything else seems fine in this section.