I'll remember by LNRoberts

Reviewer: Kailucy

Cover: 10/10

I love the cover. The font is great and the color scheme is wonderful. I like that it has a slight cartoonish look.

Title: 9/10

I like the title. It's short and sweet. It goes perfectly with the story.

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb is well written. It introduces the characters, setting, and plot. It's a good length as well. One thing that could improve is that the very first line is written in 1st person, while the rest is written in 3rd. Maybe if you put the 1st part in quotation marks if you didn't want to remove it. Of course, this is just a suggestion.

Characters: 10/10

The characters are wonderful so far. I love the diverse ages of the friend group and that while they have similarities they have different personalities. In chapter four you really see more of Ren and she's got some nerve! Not a bad thing. Giovanni seems so sweet. Great cast of characters. I can't wait to read more about them.

Plot: 19/20

So far I'm liking the plot and hope to read on to see it progress further. The cliffhanger at the end of chapter five was wonderful. Also curious about which direction you're going to go regarding Aayla's warning about Charlie's reaction. Great buildup with the chapters leading up to the larger plot.

Writing style: 19/20

I really enjoy your writing style. The dialogue is realistic and you write in a way that it's just so immersive. I felt I was there with the characters. The descriptions are wonderful and made it easy to imagine. I will mention however there was some inconsistency with the tenses. Other than that wonderfully done.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 9/10

I didn't notice very many errors. Just like I mentioned above there was some inconsistency with the tenses but other than that I didn't see much.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really enjoyed reading this and will hopefully find the time to continue.

Overall: 95/100

Overall, you have an amazing story. The characters feel real and the plot is interesting. The tenses could use some work but other than that it's really good. I can't wait to see what will happen later in the story. Keep up the great work!