Reviewer: Kailucy

Mademoiselle Noir by Borbityborb

Cover: 10/10

The cover is great. It's simple and the fonts are amazing. I love the black and white color scheme.

Title: 10/10

The title is good. It fits the story and plot along with the genre. It's simple, which is great and easy to remember.

Blurb: 9/10

The blurb is nice. It's short and simple but it explains enough. It vaguely introduces the fairytale that it's based upon along with what is going to be different. It asks the right questions and made me want to open the book and read more.

Characters: 9/10

The characters were interesting, especially Cendre. Maelle is fun to read about too but Cendre has so much mystery around her and a bit of a playful yet darkish humor which I love. My thoughts on Maelle are a bit harder for me to put into words but I enjoyed seeing things from his perspective. I honestly think it was a great idea for it to be told from his point of view. It's fun to learn about Cendre as he does and see her and he does.

Plot: 19/20

The plot is fascinating and fun. It's fast-paced but at times it feels a little too fast, that's probably just me though. I love the overall plot, the fairytale retelling with a dark twist is something I haven't really read before but I really enjoyed this. The prologue was super interesting.

Writing style: 19/20

You have a wonderful writing style. I was hooked from the first page. The descriptions are great and easy to picture everything yet without overdoing it. The dialogue felt natural and not too weird.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 9/10

There weren't too many errors. a few times when the past and present tenses would switch. There were some missing words occasionally. Other than that I didn't notice anything.

Enjoyment: 10/10

I really enjoyed reading this and I need to know what happens next and where you're going to go with this.

Overall: 95/100

Overall, you have a great story. The characters are interesting and the plot is engaging. It does need a little editing but other than that it's amazing. Keep it up!