Reviewer: Ree_Kiara
Written by: Writer_Bhavana

Cover and Title: 07/10

Here I would like to say about the cover. The background and the objects used were pleasing to the eyes and definitely looked beautiful but the font colours used ended up mixing the words with the background and therefore the title was quite difficult to read just at one single glance. Try changing that part. Either take a look at the community graphic shop or choose a different design/designer on yourself to make this little part perfect.

Blurb: 08/10

The blurb started off simple and quite decent with each character given a particular line each to throw a light on their character graph but the lack of creative sense felt quite a turn off. Try using few certain words in the dialogues or frame up the paragraph at the end in a way that would attract eyes and compel readers to turn over the pages.

Overall plotline: 09/10

Though the storyline seems a bit predictable, I must say you created an intriguing atmosphere right from the very beginning itself.

Grammar: 07/10

While writing, this part needs special care. Maybe a quick check and edit would help.

Character development: 07/10

I liked how there was a proper introduction given to Adithi's character. Even I liked the part where the Arora's were introduced in the chapter but Karthik's introduction left rushed and couldn't set in the perfect atmosphere along with his part of the story. Karthik'a introduction deserved a proper chapter dedicated to his character. Though that was just the first time the readers get an idea about him but that wasn't quite strong and couldn't create an impact.

Setting: 09/10
Description of scenes: 07/10

Before anything I would like to appreciate you for taking care of minute details in this part. You tried wonderfully to describe each little instance but still it was a bit difficult to find the emotional attachment in the story. The choice of words or sometimes a lack of expressing emotion made it feel devoid of the smoothness the scenes should have had. Quite at times, the description of the surroundings where the scene was taking place was found to be missing. A quick proper planned edit might definitely help in this case.

Originality: 10/10

Definitely there was 100% originality in your work. No doubt on that part.

Emotional attachment: 07/10

Just as I said earlier a quick planned edit will definitely help.

Overall enjoyment: 08/10

MESSAGE: I definitely loved your work. It felt great to be chosen as a reviewer. Mistakes are a part of anything that we do and that helps us in learning and being a better version of ourselves. So let not anything subdue your motivation to write. If you feel anything needs to be cleared out please reach out to me.

Love,
Kiara.