A u t h o r: RobynTheWriter827
P a c k a g e:          Hawaiian.
G e n r e:      Historical fiction.
T i t l e:    The Irish emporium.

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➺C o v e r: beautiful cover, I like how different it is. The fonts go well with the cover, I like the background but I personally think it matches well with your book.

➺S y n o p s i s: quite interesting. You described the book well, it wasn't too much and it wasn't too small. I actually wanted to read the book.

➺P u n c t u a t i o n & g r a m m a r: I couldn't find anything to complain about, your punctuation was well put in and so was the grammar.

➺P l o t: I found your plot very unique, I haven't read any book like this, I felt the connection with your characters, [ including the rude characters ].

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➻Side note: your book is really interesting, I didn't think I would enjoy it, and I did. The only think you need to work on is the length of your chapters [ personally I like short chapters, but most reader prefer 5-6 pages ], you also need to crosscheck your work before publishing, there was one spelling error in chapter two. And, try to refrain from writing short sentences, for example: my name is Beatrice, I love Marcelo. I'm sixteen.

Apart from that fabulous work, I love your writing style and how well your description is, I could feel the emotions of your main character and it felt real, so therefore keep up the good work.