RESULTS - JJK
I'm so proud of all the participants. Please don't feel bad after reading the reviews. I promise these are to help you in improving. Also, don't feel bad if you didn't win. You all are talented, no matter if you win or not. Taking part in awards itself is a win for you all.
One more thing, I'm going to come up with the mini awards after I'm done with this. If any of you unfollow me or the judge, you will be blacklisted forever.
The winners will get their prizes once all the results are announced. I'll text you all personally with the prizes.
Now let us check the reviews and then the winners.
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Judge- ParkChillin
Illusion - Yoongleskookiee777
Book cover (5/5)
The cover screams the word "Perfection". The one who made this cover for sure is super talented. The fading away graphics, the text, fonts, and the image used is perfectly conveying the exact emotions. Don't you dare change the cover-
Book title (5/5)
Of Course, it's perfect. Everything was an illusion. Even though it's like a common noun and is a common book name, I am sure this is the perfect name chosen.
Blurb (4.5/5)
You could have added a bit more details in the description. It is attractive but it could be more attractive. The epilogue is nice, Disclaimer, style is like the best.
Plot (12.5/15)
Umh.. like.. Add more Jungkook scenes to show how close they were with each other. I kind of felt he was left behind. Like more scenes with y/n and Jk alone, talking about their mere feelings. That would make more connections and the readers would feel more miserable when he has sad scenes.
Writing style (12.5/15)
Overall it's good but still, to be perfect you need to organise yourself. Write the dates, time, month, in the center alignment with bold.
Grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation mark (13/15)
Less mistakes and I loved it.
Character development (11/15)
I loved Taehyung's character, but you need to make a more solid character. Same goes with Jungkook's one.
Emotions conveyed (11/15)
The scenes could have been more detailed. The day to day life in the first chapter was not that required. You know, just spice up the scenes a bit like how they are feeling, their mental breakdowns (when there are scenes like this). You have explained the weather quite well and like that only explain their characters.
Overall connection as a reader (7.5/10)
Again, be more detailed so people can be more attached to the storyline.
Total (82/100)
Upload Season 2 soon.
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First Love - Raman_Sohal_0101
Book cover (2/5)
To be honest, I didn't like it. The cover gives more of a depressed dark underworld vibe. I recommend you get your cover done by some famous shops. And prefer light themed ones.
Book title (3.5/5)
Could definitely be more creative such as um.. "Destinedly Undestined" (I don't even know if such a word exists or not-) but "First love" is definitely sounding too boring.
Blurb (4/5)
Add more dialogues and more details.
Plot (11/15)
So far the plot is going pretty good. I loved their hospital dates and shopping trips. I would really love it if they had a little backstory that will make a reader more hooked up.
Writing style (12/15)
It's good, but it can be better. Things like "Switch of Pov" write that in center alignment and with bold. And don't write switch of pov, write "xyz's POV"
Grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation marks (13/15)
Good. No unnecessary grammar mistakes. Everything in the vocabulary was also perfect.
Character development (12/15)
I feel like there should be more Povs of Jungkook and his Povs should be more detailed. And I loved how you made y/n and made things clear about Jk and Taehyung.
Emotions conveyed (7/15)
Not gonna lie, I was hooked by the emotional scenes
Overall connection as a reader (8/10)
I really loved reading it.
Total (72.5/100)
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Baby Daddy - 4everSherlocked
Book cover (3.5/5)
The cover gives more of that unholy "Daddy" type vibes, and I almost thought Jungkook is shirtless. The cover looks more like a college love story.
Book title (4/5)
Did you mean that when daddy, Jungkook was small so it is Baby Daddy? Uh.. it sounds kinda childish and mature at the same time so I don't know more about this but don't change it! Its unique!
Blurb (5/5)
As it is a Wattpad featured, you know the blurb is a blast. I saw all the wattpad featured books' blurb a blast. The disclaimer is well written with starting date and story completed date so that's good.
Plot (12/15)
Well, I wish I was Rai :( anyways jokes aside! It was wholesome! Really like you portrayed Jungkook just the way he is, cute! And about the storyline.. i wanted to hear more dialogues of Jungkook when they were shouting. So that one could more emotionally attached with the storyline.
Anyways the storyline was awesome.
Writing style (14/15)
You definitely picked the most perfect writing style, I love this style because that's the same way I write in.
But can you highlight the hyphens or anything you use to change the povs/scenes. It makes it easier to check that a scene change is happening.
Grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation marks (13.5/15)
It has the minimum mistakes so everything good in this.
Character development (13/15)
I don't have anything to say in this part, as the characters are your choice but Ava is really one of a piece-
Emotions conveyed (12/15)
It was beautifully written enough to attract a reader, no doubt in it.
Overall connection as a reader (8/10)
I felt that strong emotions running through Seol when he was looking for his parents in the new world, so I think that part was the best for me.
Total (85/100)
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It's Darkness under the Lamp - 2LAiNA
Book cover (3/5)
You could have avoided that lil white tint in their cheeks. And somewhat Jungkook looks artificial here.
Book title (3.5/5)
We will surely get a reason why the book title is "Its Darkness under the Lamp" at the end of the book but as it is ongoing, it is difficult to tell if the title matches with the book or not. But I am sure it does.
Blurb (5/5)
The disclaimer part is perfect, how you arranged the words and literally the best blurb!! This part deserves a chef-kiss.
Plot (12.5/15)
I am a die hard fan of crime- thrillers. And finding a corpse outside your dorm and the rescue team rescuing you and Jungkook, the rescuer by holding your waist while jumping from the window is really one of a kind of plot isn't it? It's damn good, believe me! Everything in the story is fabulous and try to be regular that's it! Wish you luck with the upcoming chapters!
Writing style (11/15)
The dialogues are written in bold so it feels uncomfortable to eyes when you read them and I often got confused which line I was reading. So make the dialogues in normal font so it would not stand out much. It doesn't need to stand out. Details are well written but to help readers understand more, for example when they found the corpse, I didn't get that part until it was mentioned they found a corpse. So I am saying that these action scenes need to be detailed more in simple language.
And when you are changing scenes, use the single/double/triple stars in centre alignment with bold. You are giving it on the left with only one star, so the readers can get confused when they won't notice the change of scenes.
Grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation marks (12.5/15)
Everything is okay and fine, so basically no negative remarks in this. But sometimes I needed to read a single part 4-5 times what you wrote! I could barely comprehend anything, maybe because you are a native English speaker. I really read so many novels but never had problems understanding a writing style but I had difficulties reading yours.
I am not sure whether it's a positive remark or negative, but .. I guess you need to simplify the language of writing more.
Character development (12/15)
I really couldn't feel the mentality of Lisa even though it was Lisa pov throughout. You didn't put the main adjectives used to deliver emotions in the right place.
Emotions conveyed (10/15)
As the language used was really complicated, I was having serious issues reading a single chapter, i had to read two paragraphs four times to understand. You made writing very complicated.
Overall connection as a reader (7/10)
I felt that connection but..as the dialogues were highlighted my eyes continuously went to the dialogues first skipping the details.
Total (76.5/100)
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Judge- ViniShah2
I Can Die for this Love - Cool_Summer29
Book cover (3/5)
I liked the cover. The aesthetics, font style, and face claim were nice. But I couldn't say the same about the tagline. First of all, I didn't like where the tagline was placed.
You can shift the book title a little upwards and place the tagline right under it and about the author's name.
Second thing is, the tagline has double-inverted commas at the end. It seems like you forgot to take that off, because it has a comma too at the end, as if it was taken from a dialogue in the book. You need to edit it.
One suggestion- try using simpler language. A reader might get the first impression as if the book is going to be really tough for them to understand.
Book title (5/5)
I loved the title. Quite a unique title. I found no books with the same title on Wattpad. So, good job with that!
Blurb (5/5)
Quite an impactful and interesting blurb. No mistakes were found.
Plot (14/15)
This was the first time I read this book, and I loved the storyline. It was powerful and unique. I never came across this type of plot, and I don't regret giving my time to this book. Well done!
Writing style (12/15)
I didn't like the change of POV. While I was reading the first chapter, the POV changed from Author to Y/n's. And it was challenging for me to process the writing style for a bit. That was a bit sudden for me.
Grammar, vocabulary, and punctuation mark (11/15)
The very first line of the first chapter had a mistake.
It was the coldest day of winter. Cold breeze blowing harshly along with heavy rain as if it is an invitation to a big storm.
The starting was in the past tense, as you can see above. However, the tense changed as soon as the second line started.
Not just this, there were mistakes with punctuation marks too. Like, I noticed in so many places that there was a space before a comma and no space after using it. I found many mistakes with tenses and punctuation marks, which can only be solved after proofreading.
Character development (13/15)
I could see character development. I loved Y/n's character. Also, I could connect well with the characters since they were described well.
Emotions conveyed (15/15)
I loved the emotions conveyed. I could connect really well with the characters well. Good job!
Overall connection as a reader (8.5/10)
There were some minor mistakes, which includes grammatical and punctuation marks errors and changes in the POV. I would suggest you to stick with one POV because it disrupts the flow. Otherwise, everything was fine.
Total (86.5/100)
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SO THE WINNERS ARE -
Third prize goes to
ILLUSION by YoonglesKookiee777
Second prize goes to
BABY DADDY by 4everSherlocked
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First prize goes to
I CAN DIE FOR THIS LOVE by Cool_Summer29
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