I'm so sorry this took so long for me to post. I was in a bad headspace when I dropped my review workshop but now I am back and I have a review for you. It won't be long because it is based on only 3 chapters

Title: Empress

Author: Safa_Nas_Khan

Cover: Great cover. I just have one note. Your subtitle "Not all thrones have kings" or something like that... well, I don't know the exact words, it was hard to read either because the font itself or the size of it. But your cover had changed from the last time I saw it, and it has only improved.

Blurb: Too wordy. When readers peruse what story they want to read, they want to read something fast that gives them a glimpse of what your book is about. You've lost readers because they couldn't understand after the first paragraph of your blurb what your story is even about.

Introduction: The first two chapters were very descriptive and had a certain poetic language. But third chapter struggled to keep this voice, mainly due to some grammatical and structural problems I will discuss here in a bit.

Characters: Qamar is the only character we really know at this point. So my other analyses will be less than brief. Qamar, we are told, is this very beautiful princess who seems to have a love for nature and animals. She has a cute rottweiler and a little sister. She is less than perfect, like any heroine... though I'm not certain what her "flaws" are other than her being nervous about meeting her betrothed.
And it is alluded she has been mistreated and she fears her little sister... getting mistreated too? I dont know. Was not clear.
Also, she does not like her Stepmother... but I dont know why at this point.

Grammar: There are odd word choices, for sure. I made some inline comments for some. Another consistent note I have is you need to have a space between a period and the first letter of the first word of a new sentence.

Your sentences look like this.No space right there.

Your sentence needs a new space like this. See the difference?

Consistent or Coherent Narrative: There was a weird POV change in the middle of the 3rd chapter and it really threw me off cause we dont know who it was and it just disrupted the story for no good reason. There wasn't any new information or plot points obtained from it...

Plot: There isnt much I can say since I only read 3 chapters. The promise is there: the struggle of a princess rising to power.

Vocabulary/Descriptive language: very vivid language but it was almost distracting at some points... like I wanted to skim sometimes because it was so much describing and pretty words that I started to get impatient.

Promo/tags: tags promise a mystery and thriller and romance and proclaims this book is a hiddengem...  not sure if promises are held since I didn't read past chapter 3

Ending**: N/A