24:00 HOURS

Queen_Nymph_Zinnia

TITLE 7/10: From what I can guess, there will be 24 chapters, one for every hour of the day until you reach 24:00 Hours

COVER 8/10: Your cover is really pretty and I like the fact that you added a clock on your book cover to fit with your theme

DESCRIPTION 8/10: Your description is very detailed and brings up Posie's gift without giving too much information, the only negative I see in your description is that it is a bit too long

FACE CLAIMS 9/10: I liked the disposition of your face claims with the quotes and also there is a good diversity in your face claims

STORYLINE 8/10: From the 7 chapters I've read so far, I can see that you have a strong and well-researched storyline. But sometimes it is a bit complicated to know what Posie's gift is and what can she do about it. Otherwise, I can see real potential in your story.

BONUS 5/5, grammar: Your writing is really good and you used a lot of researched words and synonyms. There is also a lot of description that helps and a good imagery. I didn't see any errors at all.

NOTES/ REVIEW: I thought it took some time before the storyline started. Posie's friendships, especially with Dahlia, is intriguing and well crafted. Also, her friendship with other Slytherins is realistic.

TOTAL: 40/50 + 5 bonus points

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