A GAME OF SURVIVAL
tellsbooks

TITLE 7/10: it fits the story very well, but it's not too unique. I just looked up "a game of survival" and there are hundreds of other stories with the exact same title

COVER 10/10: I like it and I think it fits the dramatic vibe of the story!

DESCRIPTION 7/10: it does a very good job of drawing readers in, but I'm not sure about that second paragraph. that's kind of an important plot point, and some people may consider it a spoiler while others may not

FACE CLAIMS X/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 7/10: it's a solid and clearly well thought out storyline. for me though, the fascination just wasn't there. I imagined it getting repetitive with Thea almost getting caught and then narrowly escaping each time, and that didn't make me want to keep reading

BONUS 4.5/5, grammar: I usually don't give half points, but this is an exception. the grammar and word choice are nearly perfect, just a few tiny errors every once in a while

NOTES/ REVIEW: I want to point out that your use of detail is amazing and it provides vivid imagery. I will admit I did not read all 60 chapters because of the comment I made about the storyline, but you have a very strong story that will make it far. I hope you get published one day!

TOTAL: 31/40 + 4.5 bonus points

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(rated by sett )