A NEW LIFE BEGINS
@TheWIERDDOne

TITLE 8/10: i feel like it could be a little more unique, but it does make perfect sense with the story

COVER 10/10: it's really cool!

DESCRIPTION 10/10: it explains the story well and hooks the reader in

FACE CLAIMS x/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 10/10: so far, i like it. you've done a good job in the first few chapters setting up for the main story line. the idea seems to be unique too

BONUS 4.5/5, grammar: i only noticed a couple errors about where a comma should have been placed, but nothing major

NOTES/ REVIEW: i think a lot of people can unfortunately relate to what happened to harry, so this story provides a very important lesson about coming out. i'm glad you're writing this, because awareness definitely needs to be raised. there's not too much to improve on, so good job!

TOTAL: 38/40 + 4.5 bonus points

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