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@strangelydrstrange
TITLE 10/10: it isn't too unique, but it's the name of the song so i won't take off any points
COVER 10/10: it's really cool!
DESCRIPTION 9/10: it is pretty long, but it does do a good job of hooking the reader into the story
FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they're perfect! i like how you made a diverse face claim for james
STORYLINE 10/10: i love the story line! it makes sense, flows well, and makes you want to keep reading
BONUS 5/5, grammar: i don't think i saw any mistakes
NOTES/ REVIEW: i love love love this story! you did an amazing job of developing peter's character, and because of that, this is my favorite peter pettigrew fic. i highly recommend it!
TOTAL: 49/50 + 5 bonus points
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