DARLING DIES AT THE END
AnnualDayne

TITLE 2/10: I'm pretty confused by the title. It's unique...but I can't tell if you're trying to be poetic or completely spoiling the story? I'm leaning towards the latter...

COVER 7/10: The cover looks great, but I think the title could be a little easier to read. It's there, but it blends in so well with the rest of the cover.

DESCRIPTION 10/10: The descriptions great and completely gets the point across. It's funny and descriptive all at the same time.

FACE CLAIMS 10/10: The face claims are nicely picked and the gifs are good quality so 10/10 on that.

STORYLINE 9/10: The storyline itself is good. It's creative and clearly thought out. I really liked it and can't say I have anything bad to say about it really.

BONUS 5/5, grammar: Your grammar was great, and even the way you wrote how Roach speaks was great.

NOTES/ REVIEW: I really liked it and hope you continue to write it!

TOTAL: 38/50 + 5 bonus points
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