ENEMIES FOREVER
ENEMIES FOREVER
TITLE 6/10: the title isn't very unique but it goes with your story
COVER 9/10: your cover is really pretty
DESCRIPTION 9/10: already from your description, I can see that I will like your story, it gives me Romeo and Juliet vibes. And I like modern readaptation of Shakespeare plays (sorry I read your foreword after doing this criteria)
FACE CLAIMS 8/10: there are only two face claims, but I like that you included aesthetic and Shawn Mendes is a favorite of mine so an extra point for him :)
STORYLINE 7/10: Your storyline isn't unique but I like where it's going anyway
BONUS 1/5, grammar: I've seen a few errors but you mentioned in your foreword that you haven't edited yet your story so it makes sense.
NOTES/ REVIEW: I know your story fits into the cliché stereotype but honestly I like stories where boy and girl hate each other but learn more about the other one and falls in love, so your story is definitively in my palette.
TOTAL: 39/50 + 1 bonus points
80%
( rated by kit )
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