FALLING FOR AUTUMN

brunette-bombshell

TITLE 8/10: well, your title is nice and fits with your story

COVER 6/10: your cover is a bit dark and the juxtaposition of the girl, the wolf and the moon is a bit too much for me

DESCRIPTION 8/10: the description is interesting and maybe it's because I've read like one or two Twilight fanfics, but from experience, I've never seen a plot like this one. I'm guessing this is a commonly used plot, but it's how you write it that makes your different from others.

FACE CLAIMS 7/10: instead of face claims, I'll judge your aesthetics. They were cute and worked well with the Twilight universe, I also liked that you added a playlist, I'm a sucker for playlists

STORYLINE 8/10: your story is quite fast-paced but that way we can see Jacob and Autumn's relationship throughout the three books. I'm giving you a good mark because I don't know what really happens during the second and third book (I've only watched the first movie )

BONUS 4/5, grammar: there is a good balance between dialogue and description, I didn't see a lot of errors

NOTES/ REVIEW: Twilight fanfictions are not my genre to go, I don't know much about this universe but most of these criteria are not based on knowledge of the Twilight universe

TOTAL: 37/50 + 4 bonus points

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( rated by kit )