FLEAMONT POTTER AND THE GUARDIAN

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TITLE 9/10: the title is unique and interesting

COVER 9/10: the cover is really pretty and elegant

DESCRIPTION 8/10: the description is good and explains some details but it does not include the fact that Fleamont was born instead of Harry (I don't know if you purposely did it)

FACE CLAIMS X/10: they aren't any face claims so I'll not take this category into account

STORYLINE 9/10: the storyline is very interesting and I found myself wanting to read more about Fleamont's life, his time at Hogwarts and his relationship with James

BONUS 3/5, grammar: your chapters are long and well detailed

NOTES/ REVIEW: I found the idea of Fleamont's childhood (I won't spoil anything) and his relationship with James really interesting. I did not expect James to be this way and wanted to know more. The characters' emotions are realistic.

TOTAL: 35/40 + 3 bonus points

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( rated by kit )