FLORA
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TITLE 10/10: it definitely fits, especially since the book is formatted as flora's journal

COVER 10/10: the cover also makes sense because it's like a patterned cover of a journal. i like it!

DESCRIPTION 10/10: it does a very good job of drawing the reader in. it's also not too long, and not too short

FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they all look great!

STORYLINE 8/10: it's very well thought out and clearly planned. the events flow perfectly, and you can get pretty invested in the storyline. however, right now flora is kind of unrelatable to a reader, constantly blind to her surroundings and always in the "I'm brilliant" mindset. I've been waiting for a change to be made in her character to progress the plot to something other than hating Sirius, but it still hasn't happened yet

BONUS 5/5, grammar: the grammar is pretty much flawless!

NOTES/ REVIEW: you're a very good writer! like I said earlier, your story is written so well that I got really wrapped up in it. I'm hoping sometime in the near future that flora's character will start to grow more, and I'll definitely keep reading it as it's updated!

TOTAL: 48/50 + 3 bonus points

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