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Dragonrat703

TITLE 8/10: I've seen this title on other books but it really fits with your story

COVER 7/10: your cover is nice looking

DESCRIPTION 9/10: wow your description is really interesting and makes me want to read your book

FACE CLAIMS x/10: there are no face claims so I'll skip this part

STORYLINE 7/10: there are some parts I didn't quite understand but it's because there is a special jargon used in this book but once you explained it on later chapter it helped me better understand this book.

BONUS 4/5, grammar: your writing is clean and edited. I didn't see a lot of errors and your story was fluent.

NOTES/ REVIEW: your story looks like a real book, one that could be published, with its configuration. Although not my preferred style to read, your story was interesting.

TOTAL: 31/40 + 4 bonus points

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