PANDEMONIUM

sunxuxi

TITLE 7/10: it's interesting and unique, but seeing as how pandemonium means "chaos", I'm not exactly sure how it fits the story. I'm sure you have your reasons for it, I just personally don't see it

COVER 10/10: it's clean and eye-catching!

DESCRIPTION 9/10: it's a bit long, but I think that's okay because it does an excellent job giving the reader everything they need to know to draw them in

FACE CLAIMS X/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 10/10: I love it so much. I don't even know where to begin. it's a very clever idea, to have Voldemort be reborn like a phoenix. it's a perfect origin story, each event building up to the ultimate goal, which is to show tom's circumstances and how it will bring out his inner evil. you also keep adding new elements and flashbacks that keep the reader intrigued and wanting more

BONUS 5/5, grammar: it's honestly flawless. I don't think I saw a single mistake

NOTES/ REVIEW: this story is stunning. I highly recommend it to anyone searching for a good book, and I'm so anxious to find out what happens next. well done

TOTAL: 36/40 + 5 bonus points

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