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TITLE 10/10: I like it! it's unique, and it really represents Neville and Luca's friendship

COVER 8/10: it's beautiful, but since the entire thing is a dark shade of blue there isn't something to make it really pop out and catch the eye of the reader

DESCRIPTION 7/10: it's really long, so I'd recommend cutting it down a bit. it did draw me in though, and I definitely was interested in reading it

FACE CLAIMS X/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 7/10: I think the whole storyline idea is great, and I'm enjoying it. however, it's moving at quite a slow pace. I see a lot of development of Neville and Luca's relationship and their mutual love and support, but not too much plot progression

BONUS 5/5, grammar: your grammar is pretty much flawless, and that's super impressive considering how long your chapters are

NOTES/ REVIEW: I really am enjoying this book, but I just feel like there should be a bit more movement in the plot after 9 long chapters. I definitely will keep reading though! I have questions that I'm dying to get an answer to in future chapters

TOTAL: 32/40 + 5 bonus points

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