PERFECTLY WRONG

-emmahayley-

TITLE 10/10: I like the reference to the Shawn Mendes song and your title fits with your description.

COVER 10/10: Your cover is really pretty, I like how well the background fits with the rest of your cover.

DESCRIPTION 10/10: It explains what the story is going to be about without giving too much and hooking the reader. Good job !

FACE CLAIMS 9/10: I love Jenna Coleman as the oc, the other face claims are nice but I could go for a bit more diversity.

STORYLINE 9/10: I think the storyline is very unique and I feel like everything that is written has a purpose. I like your characters especially Estelle!

BONUS 5/5, grammar: You write very well, I didn't see any errors and you describe a lot which is really nice.

NOTES/ REVIEW: I like strong characters and Estelle is one of them. Your story is unique and I can't wait to continue reading your story as you upload more chapters. Also, the Taylor Swift/Harry Potter video is on point!

TOTAL: 48/50 + 5 bonus points

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