PRONGSLET
@Fanfictionist2004

TITLE 10/10: i like it! it is referred to often in the story and i haven't seen it before

COVER 10/10: i like it, the green color scheme works well

DESCRIPTION 10/10: it explains the story well and hooks the reader in

FACE CLAIMS X/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 4/10: so i feel like for the majority of the story, the story line is really repetitive. harry experiences something that triggers him, sirius and remus reassure him, and then shortly after there's another relapse. however, i liked how at the end you added the whole wormtail conflict, although it did end pretty abruptly

BONUS 2/5, grammar: there were plenty of errors in punctuation, capitalization, and grammar, so i'd recommend going back to proofread

NOTES/ REVIEW: just keep in mind what i said about the story line. other than that, good job

TOTAL: 34/40 + 2 bonus points

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