Red

FxutureMrsMxalfoy

TITLE 8/10: I like the title but it could be improved a little more

COVER 8/10: It's nice but the title 'Red' is barely visible (well to me) and the author name doesn't contrast well with the background and it's a little too big

DESCRIPTION 10/10: I love it as it doesn't give away everything in the story and it's a great hook!

FACE CLAIMS X/10: There are no face-claims included so this will be removed from your total

STORYLINE 9/10: It's a humorous and quite interesting storyline

BONUS 5/5, grammar: Perfect grammar!

NOTES/ REVIEW: I really enjoyed reading your story. You can make it more detailed but overall, it's really good!

TOTAL: 35/40 +5 bonus points

87.5%

( reviewed by salire )