SAVING F.
spacethyme

TITLE 8/10: it doesn't wow me, but it makes sense

COVER 10/10: I really like how clean it is and how it pops!

DESCRIPTION 10/10: I like it! it's short and sweet

FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they're diverse, unique, and interesting

STORYLINE 10/10: I found myself very much interested in this storyline. it is a clever idea, and I like how it is being executed so far. keep doing what you're doing

BONUS 5/5, grammar: it's pretty much flawless!

NOTES/ REVIEW: this story was a lot more intriguing to me than the other one. I really like the idea of showing newt's pain after the obscurial girl's death, and I can't wait to see that developed

TOTAL: 48/50 + 5 bonus points

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( rated by sett )