SCATTERBRAIN
sunxuxi

TITLE 8/10: it's a decent title, but it doesn't "wow" me

COVER 9/10: I really like the thought put into it (especially with how the Rubix cube was incorporated) but if the title could pop more that would make it even better

DESCRIPTION 10/10: it's really captivating!

FACE CLAIMS x/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 10/10: the amount of detail and thought put into it is amazing. it also builds suspense and leaves the reader wanting more. keep doing what you're doing!

BONUS 5/5, grammar: very clean and well written

NOTES/ REVIEW: the storyline is stunning. once again I have to applaud you for your great writing that has analogies, metaphors, and other elements that bring it to the next level. I definitely will keep reading, and I look forward to more updates!

TOTAL: 37/40 + 5 bonus points

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( rated by sett )