SECOND THOUGHTS
FxutureMrsMxalfoy

TITLE 8/10: it doesn't exactly make me go "wow" but it matches the story well

COVER 8/10: I really like the style of it and it definitely pops, but I just don't know if the general vibe fits the story if that makes any sense. I don't look at it and think "that definitely looks like a runaway bride"

DESCRIPTION 10/10: pretty much perfect!

FACE CLAIMS 5/10: you've chosen them well, but where are the actors' names?

STORYLINE 6/10: I feel like this story has potential, but maybe consider adding a bit more backstory, like why was Tracey even planning to marry that guy in the first place? it's with those types of details and little pieces of subplot that draw people in

BONUS 3.5/5, grammar: there's overall room for improvement with it, and I also noticed a few areas where odd sentences were that didn't make sense

NOTES/ REVIEW: your story is good so far, but as I said, it has room for improvement. the part I will stress the most is the comment I made on the storyline, as that's what will really take it up a notch

TOTAL: 37/50 + 3.5 bonus points

77.5%

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