SECRETS OF MAGIC
@CaerusTonks

TITLE 8/10: i feel like it could be a bit more unique, but it does make sense

COVER 10/10: i like it!

DESCRIPTION 9/10: it is a little long, but it hooks the reader in nicely

FACE CLAIMS x/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 8/10: the story line flows well so far, it's well developed, and it's unique. however, it is moving pretty slow

BONUS 5/5, grammar: i don't think there were any mistakes!

NOTES/ REVIEW: i really really like this story! it's very well written, and elwyn is a nice, rounded character. i would recommend working on the pace, but other than that, great job

TOTAL: 35/40 + 5 bonus points

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