STARY SKIES AND STARRY-EYED
Ravenclaw_Phan

TITLE 10/10: I've never seen another book with this title, and it's related to the story multiple times throughout the book

COVER 6/10: the cover is very dark, so the image isn't eye catching, and the font is a little difficult to read. But the fade of the colour is pretty

DESCRIPTION 8/10: the description is good, a little misleading for one aspect but it gives the reader a good sense of what the story will bring.

FACE CLAIMS 0/10: there aren't any so i'll cut this part out of your total

STORYLINE 7/10: its very consistent, it is quick paced, and the plot is a little lacking in suspense but you can ignore that point for me because I'm really big on cliff hangers. Altogether it's definitely something I would read in the car or while I'm procrastinating doing my homework.

BONUS 3/5, grammar: your spelling and grammar are great! And I'm happy you didn't use the same adjectives throughout the entire story. The only thing that I noticed is when you are using dialogue you have two people speaking in the same paragraph. I'm an English nerd so I like to read stories where a new speaker starts a new paragraph (does that make sense? I don't know I'm tired) but otherwise you have great grammar

NOTES/ REVIEW: i like that it's a cute love story, and you could definitely expand with it. The quick paced story isn't something I would normally read but it's still good.

TOTAL: 31/40 + 3 bonus points
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( rated by vixen )