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SYMPHONY OF MAGIC AND WIZARDY: A FATEFUL DECISION

SYMPHONY OF MAGIC AND WIZARDY: A FATEFUL DECISION
@LHT1995

TITLE 10/10: it's unique, i've definitely never seen anything like it before!

COVER 6/10: i feel like it could be more eye catching and interesting, because it's just a picture of hogwarts with the title and a border

DESCRIPTION 10/10: it explains the story well

FACE CLAIMS x/10: this will not be deducted from your total since you have no face claims

STORYLINE 9/10: you have a pretty strong, well-written storyline. there's not too much to improve on

BONUS 4/5, grammar: i saw a couple punctuation errors, but nothing major

NOTES/ REVIEW: this story definitely isn't something that i'd usually read because i'm not really into anime. because of that, i had a hard time getting interested in the story, but that's just my personal problem. all that aside, you've written it well, so keep doing what you're doing

TOTAL: 35/40 + 4 bonus points

91.5%

( rated by sett )

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