THE LAST PHILOSOPHER

NickfEast 

TITLE 7/10:  the title is mysterious and can easily hook the future readers

COVER 6/10: the cover is pretty dark and it's a bit hard to understand what's on the cover. I know there is a man and I think there is a fire

DESCRIPTION 9/10:  your description gives enough details so the reader knows what to expect

FACE CLAIMS X/10:  you don't have any face claims so I'll  just skip this part

STORYLINE 8/10:  your storyline is unique, I've never seen anything like it

BONUS 5/5, grammar:  your writing is very good and there are a lot of details 

NOTES/ REVIEW:  you clearly write well and there are a lot of things going on at the same time. A lot of complicated name of places and people made it difficult for me to understand certain parts of your story. 

TOTAL: 30/40 + 5 bonus points

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( rated by kit )