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@proxtego

TITLE 4/10: it's a really common title, and i can't tell how it's related to the story yet

COVER 10/10: it's gorgeous!

DESCRIPTION 10/10: i will not take off any points because i know the real summary is inside

FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they're perfect

STORYLINE 10/10: the storyline looks great so far! the pace is good, and it all makes sense to the reader

BONUS 3.5/5, grammar: there aren't any spelling errors, but there are a lot of punctuation and spacing errors. make sure you always put a space after a comma or a period, like i just did in the previous sentence

NOTES/ REVIEW: your story is really good so far! i love your use of detail and imagery to enhance the setting and characters. keep up the great work

TOTAL: 44/50 + 3.5  bonus points

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( rated by sett )