UNTIL THEN, WALTER EDMUND

thesuspenceseeker

TITLE 9/10: the title is unique and related to your story

COVER 9/10: your cover is simple but pretty, from it I can gather that this story will involve letters

DESCRIPTION 7/10: it is a bit simple but it works and I understood what this story will be about with only one sentence

FACE CLAIMS x/10: there are no face claims, so I'll skip this part

STORYLINE 5/10: I think the concept of writing letters every day is quite common but your story is still interesting, I know there is more to come

BONUS 3/5, grammar: knowing that your story is written like Walter Edmund's private journal, your style of writing is alright

NOTES/ REVIEW: I don't understand in which era this book is set like I know Walter reads comics but he reads old books and writes like someone who isn't from the 21st century. I like the fact that Walter lives in a small village because it reminds me of the village (not as small as Walter's thought)

TOTAL: 30/40 + 3 bonus points

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( rated by kit )