WINNIE
WINNIE
@simplypassionate
TITLE 10/10: it's unique and referenced in the story
COVER 10/10: it's so pretty, i love it!
DESCRIPTION 10/10: it's really original! i love how you described the parallels between evi, fred, and george and winnie the pooh
FACE CLAIMS 10/10: they're perfect
STORYLINE 10/10: the story line is intriguing! it's well-developed, there's not too much to improve on
BONUS 4.5/5, grammar: i saw one or two errors but they were clearly just typos, nothing major to be concerned about
NOTES/ REVIEW: i really like the way you write your characters and your relationships. overall, you have a great story!
TOTAL: 50/50 + 4 bonus points
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