ZEPHYR 

Ms_Kupcake

TITLE 10/10: Very interesting title, I've never a book with this title

COVER 10/10: your cover is really beautiful, well done!

DESCRIPTION 8/10: the description is good and mysterious, it definitively hooked me up on reading your story.

FACE CLAIMS x/10: there aren't any so i'll cut this part out of your total

STORYLINE 8/10: I really like where you are going with this story. I find the mystery around Zephyr's parents interesting.

BONUS 3/5, grammar: in general your writing style is good, but sometimes some sentences had structures that made it a bit difficult to understand them. There could be more description but altogether your grammar is great. 

NOTES/ REVIEW: I like your story so far, it's interesting, keep up the good work! 

TOTAL: 36/40 + 3 bonus points

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( rated by kit )