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13. claustrophobia

Next day... 

Kunj asked Anamika

kunj - mom ....dad kahaa h??

Anamka- Uday went to shimla for some meeting sham tak aa jaenge..

kunj- okay.. dad se kuch forms sign karwane tha me universty se ake de dunga..

Manik came down.. n about to go.. kunj also went..

manik n kunj both went near lift..

manik sighs n thinks - Ab iske sath lift me jaunga to firse puchega kal k bare me.. i should take stairs..

manik turned to leave

kunj -haww ek gari me ni jaa skte ab ek lift me bhi nhi... me kia sher hu...  jo apko khaa jaega??

Manik - shut up..

And Manik left.. kunj enters in the left.. sighing..

kunj was waiting for the lift to come down.. suddenly it went stop...

kunj frowned - ye lift ko kiaa hua..

he pressed the bell but it was not working... n the lights were also not working it was darkkk...

kunj panicked - Hello... somebody... ..

Kunj - koi darwazaa kholo..plzz...

kunj shivered as he was scared of dark... he was clostrophobic...

Kunj gasped - koi h??

his hands shivered - b..bhai?? i think i should call bhai..

with shaking hands he called manik.. manik jzz sat in car

Manik picked up

kunj - b..bhai.. bhai i...

manik irritated  - ab ye kiaa naya natak h..  kyu disturb kar re ho tum mujhe call karke...suno kunj.. i m getting late for my class and m literally not in a mud to argue with u.. so dnt u dare irritate me again..

and manik cuts the call...

kunj - h..hello.. bhai.. bhai plzz listen..

but call got cut...

kunj - ab.. ne kia karu.. mom.. yaa mom...

kunj called anamika but lines was not reachable.. and with his shaking hand soon phone fell down n broke.. ..

kunj panicked - ohh shitt... koi darwazaa kholo plzzz.. plzz

he started banging.. but lift was locked... kunj felt suffocated...

kunjjj was banging the door n shouting but no one was there to listen...

kunj coughed for sometime but the darkness made him more scare n suffocated...

kunjj - koi h .. plzz darwaza kholo .. plzz i... (and then he fell down unconsious )

Evening time..

After the university... manik entered... uday was not there... anamika was there..

Anamika sighs as he knows manik will not talk

anamika waas trying kunj but phone was not reachable...

Manik entered in his room but kunj was not there

manik thinks - Aj ye kunj nhi aya... har roz to mere room me mujhse phle pohoch jata h... chalo acha he h...

few time passed.. uday came...

uday - kiaa hua Annu..

Annu tensed - Dekho na ye ladka kunj.. kabhi kuch ni batata.. ab subah nikla tha abhi sham ho ayi... but is ladke ko dekhiye abhi tak ghar ni ayaa.. manik kab ka aa gya ghar...

uday sighs - iske friend ko lagao or pucho.. kha h..

anamika - mere pass to sirf karan ka no h..

anamika called karan.. n asked him .

karan - nhi aunty aj to kunj.. universty nhi ayaa..

anamkka shocked - what?? to kia kisi friend k ghar wagera pe gya h kia.. tumje kuch pta h

karan - Aree kunj k sare frndz to hum he h n humme se kisika koi plan ni tha..

Anamika - okayy..

Manik came down ..at that time..

uday - kia kahaa... ??

Annu tensed - vo log to keh re h kunj aj universty he ni gyaa...

Manik shocked to hear this

uday - to khaa jaa sakta h ye...

Annu - i dont know.. phone bhi ni lag ra iska...

Manik tensed n thinks and something strikes him suddenly n he ran out...

Uday - Manik... Manik.. where are u going wait...!!

Manik ran near the lift n press the button it was showing it is stuck in the second floor..

Manik ran there

uday followed him - manik kar kiaa rahe ho tum ..

manik -Apne lift thik karwayaa tha??

uday - ya i told annu to... do that..

manik sighs n ran to the second floor n continiously pressing the bell...

anamika came.. - tumlog yhaa kia kar re ho

uday - Annu lift thik ni karwaya tumne?

Anamika - ha meine kahaa to tha workers ko.. unlogo ne kaha ek do din me ake  thik kar denge... but why are u asking.. all this and tumlog yaha kia kar re ho ..

Manik shouts - Kyuki KUNJ is stuck here..!!!

uday  shocked - yee kiaa bol re ho tu.m.. manik hosh me to ho..!!!

manik tensed - i dont knw but i have a feeling ki he is here...  bcz subah lift me uthte dekha tha meine use.. and university bhi nhi pohcha to hosakta h ..

Uday n Anamika shocked

Annu - WHATT..!!! no no... oh god..

Manik started banging the door but obviously how can they broke the lift door...

Anamika panicked -kunj is clostrophobic.. uday plzz kuch karo... jldi darwazaa khulwaoo.. plzz

Anamika cried - kunj.. kunjjj betaa can u hear me kuch to bolo beta kia tum andar ho??

but no response..

Uday immidiately called a mechanical team and they somehow opened the door...

Manik thinks - oh god... bhgwan kare ki kunj yhaa na ho... meri intution galat nikle..god plzz ..

It was so dark out there..

Udayy - kiaa hua koi h yahaa manik??

they put on the torch... manik shocked... a body was lieng out there..

manik ran there n clutched him - Kunjjj??

Anamika gasped in shock - Kunj....

Kunj lied unconsious ..

manik put his head on manik's lap.. n shook him.. 


uday panicked - kunj...kunj uthooo..!!!

manik shook him but kunj's body was cold...

manik scared - Iski body to thandi par gayi h h

Anamika scared - Kunj... kunj...!!!

Manik picked him up n entered at home... n then lied him in his room...

Anamika cried - kunj.. kunj baccha ankhe kholo.. plzz

manik rushed to washroom.. wet a towel and..softly tab his face.. weeping the sweats  from his face but kunj was still faint...

Manik angrily - Call a doctor dammit..!!!

Anamika realised n uday started calling...

Manik shook kunj - kunj... kunj get up... kunj ankhe khol... dekh yhaa koi andhera nhi h.. kunj plz

but he was unresponsive.. manik guilty he remembered kunj's call..

manik thinks - Agar me kunj k sath lift me jata to aj ye sab hota he ni.... shit...

Soon doctor came..

uday tensed - Doc.. ye thik to h na..

doc -  he is Claustrophobic.. so when he was stuck there he felt suffocated and scared  or dar k mare he iski body thandi par gyi h..

Anamkka cried - ye ankhe kyu ni khol ra

doc - Mrs.singhaniya.. use jis chiz se dar h wohee pe lagbhag 5-6 ghnte tak vo stuck tha.. or behosh bhi..  ye to acha hua aaplogo ne sahi wakt pe nikal laye.. warna... thori der or hojaty to baat bigar skty thi... but dont worry he is fine now... ise sone dijiye.. subah tak he will be perfectly alright...

Anamkka n uday left with doctor.. manik sighs tensed n sat beside him... he wss first awkward but then he caressed his head.. concern for his lil brother was written in his face...

Manik - aj jo galty hui h.. esi galty dubara kabhi nhi hogi... kash me tumhari baat sunleta... kash...

Kunj was in deep sleep... manik holds his hand... n rubbed it.. bcz it wss still cold..

At Sighaniya Mansion...

Annu tensed - Doctor kunj thik h na...

Doc - yes yes Mrs.singhaniya he is fine lift me kafi der band rehne ki wajh se vo ghutan mehsus kar ra tha n claustrophobic ko to ye sab or zyada hota h... wese acha hua aaplogo ne use bahar nikal lia.. agar kuch der or rehta to shayed hospital admit karna parta.... well abhi to meine use nind ki injection de di h so let him sleep.. n dnt disturb him...

uday - thank you doctor...

doc - No no Mr.singhaniya it was my duty...

doc left..

Anamika sighed in releif .. n hugged uday...

Anamika cried.. uday - Annu.. why are u crying.. kunj bilkul thik h

Annu - sab meri galty h.. mujhe lift thik karwalena chahiye tha.. immidiately mujhe pta tha ki kunj ko claustrophobia... atleast warn to kar sakty thi use.. but i didnt do it... mere dimag se hi nikal gya ki me use inform karu... lift na use kare.

uday - Ssshh itz ok... relax... waise agar sahi wakt par manik ne ake lift ki baat agar nhi kari hoty to hume to pta bhi ni chlta..

Anamika smiles - yaa he do cares...

Otherside..

Manik was gazing at kunj... his heart skipped a bit when he saw kunj like this on the lift...

Manik holding his hand and jzz gazing at him n remembered he did call manik.. but he only didnt give hoot to his call...

Uday and Anamika entered... n saw Manik sitting beside kunj... n ass lost in his thoughts but was holding kunj's hand securely... both smiled..

uday - Manik..

Manik startled and loosened his grip kunj's hand fell back on bed...

uday - Kunj thik h.. tum chinta mat karo.. n thanks sahi wakt par hume batane k liye.. tum ni hote to.. shayed.. hum kunj ko dhund he ni pate... aj tumne sach me ek bare bhai hone ka farz nibhaya h..

Manik stiff.. elder brother? he never considered that relation .. did he?? then why he is so concern about him..

Anamika - ya manik thank you .. you..

Manik looked away - kisi rishte k khatir meine kuch ni kiaa... kia h to.. bas insaniyat k khatir...

Manik left... because he has too much ego to accept his feeling..

Both sighs...

uday - ya to ye apne dil ki baat kabhi zubaan pe ni layega ... ya fir hum log kuch zyada he ummid kr bethe h...

Anamika went near kunj .. caresses his head and kissed his head.. ..

Anamika - humesha bas mumma ko pareshan karna h... hai na?? jante ho na tumhari mumma ki jaan ho tum..

uday - Annu.. let him sleep n jo kuch bhi hua bas ek accident tha isme kisika hath ni tha... lets go..

Anamika nodded n left.. uday caressed kunj for one last time then left switching off the light...

Night passed..

Manik was sleeping in his room suddenly he dreamt of all that happened today n dream

                            ***
Kunj crying - bhai.. bhai plzz mujhe chorke mat jao.. mujhe andhere se bht dar lgtaa h.. bhai plzz.. plzz bhai... m scared bhai.. plzz
                          *****

.. he woke up panicking...

Manik look at the watch itz midnight 2 am ..

Manik thinks worried - Kunj...

He went toward his room first he was awkward but then he entered and saw him sleeping... 

Manik thinks - Ye to soo he raa h.. me bhi ptaa nhi kiaa sochke aa gyaa...

Manik was about to go at that time... the dream that kunj's pleading voice roam in his ears..

Manik thinks -Agar ye adhi raat ko uth gya to?? or ise firse dar lagne lage... n fir dubara kuch.. no no.. mujhe yhi rehna chahiye atleast jab tak subah ni hojaty.. i think i shud stay...

Manik sat beside him and gazed at him..

Manik - Kabhi socha ni tha ki tumhare room me bhi me raat guzarunga... but tumne vo bhi karwa dia... (he sighs) n he dnt know why he felt like caressing his head.. so he did...

soon Manik fell asleep....

Next day morning...

sun rays touched Manik's eye he frowned n woke up... n realised he is in kunj's room.. n itz morning 5'o clock

Manik panicked but then saw kunj was still unconsious..

Manik sighs - Shukar h ise abhi tak hosh ni aayaa... warna agar ye mujhe yaha dekh leta to pata nhi konsa pahar utha leta... isse phle ki koi aye mujhe yha se chalna chahiye

Manik secretly go out from his room.... few time passed now it was 8 iin the morning...

Anamika and uday entered in kunj's room... both tensed to see... kunj didnt woke up yet

Anamika - Uday ye to ab bhi behosh h.. doc ne to kha tha subah uth jaega...

uday - nind ki injection bhi di thi na doctor ne .. tum chinta mat karo uth jaega..

Anamkka sat beside him n caressed his head - uth jao.. baby... see mumma is waiting for u...

Kunj frowned in his sleep he then gripped Annu's hand tightly he was dreaming tht he is stuck inside..

Annu shocked - kunj.. kunj?? can u hear me baby.. utho...

uday tensed - kunj.. ankhe kholo beta..

Kunj moved his face here n there being restless and then woke up gasping...

Anamkka - Kunj.. baccha..

Kunj was in lil trauma he didnt realise for few seconds where he was.. n hugged annu like a baby..

kunjj - bht.. bht andhera h mumma... plzz ise hatao plzz plzz ...

Anamkka cubbed his face - Sshh ssh.. koi andhera ni h baby.. dekho.. tum apne room me ho.. me hu papa h.. sab h yha or lights bhi.. h..

Kunj then realised ... he felt his racing his heart beat came at halt..

Uday caressed him - betaa sab thik h... relax..

kunj hugged him in tears - mujhe lagaa me aaplogo ko kabhi dekh he ni paunga... andhere me itnaa dam ghut raa tha mera...

Annu - na beta esa ni kehte... m sorry baccha lift kharab thi.. or me tumhe ye inform he ni kar payi...

kunj - no mom itz ok.. apne janbuch k thori na kuch kia h... m fine...

Uday got a call - god subah hoty nhi ki offic k calls ana start hojata h... is phn ko band he kar deta hu...

kunj - no dad... agar aap mere liye karna chahte ho.. then plz dnt do it m fine... ap sabko pta he h i have a phobia of darkness... bas isliye behosh hogya tha ... ye koi bari baat ni h.. aap plzz call attend kijiye....

uday sighs n nodded he left...

Anamika - u really scared us last night...

kunj hugged her - aree mumma m fine... or ap to super mom ho... bacha he liaa mujhe...

Anamika - no kunj.. meine ni bachaya infact hume to pta bhi nhi tha ki tum kha..

kunj confused - to aplogo ko kese pta chla..

Anamika smiled - it was Manik...

kunj shocked .. Anamika told everythng that hppnd last night... .

kunj suprised - Bhai ne bachaya mujhe? mumma r u serious??

Annu nodded...

kunj sighs - Chalo meri zyada na sahi par thori to fikar h... unhe... m happy with that..

Anamika thinks - i know ki kal puri raat manik yaha tha but me ye baat tumhe bataungi nhi kunj.. kyuki wese he tum isse rishte se bohot zyada ummid laga chuke ho.. kal ko agr manik ne puri tarah se ye rishta tod dia.. to tum tut jaoge.. or maa hoke me ye bardash ni kar paungi .. to itz better jo jesa h wese chlne dete h... i hope ki manik ko jald he uske dil me kia h uska ehsaas ho jay...

kunj - mom kaha khogye

Anamika - nothing.. u rest.. me breakfast leke aty hu..

kunj smiled n nodded..

Manik was restless in his room - Mrs singhaniya khana bana ri h that means kunj ko hosh aa gya h... me kiaa karu.. jau kiaa usse milne?? no no me kyu jau... par kahi na kahi m also responsible... par... kher me dur se dekh k aa jaunga...

Manik was literally fighting with himself

Manik went near kunj's room and was secretly peeping in... he lookef at kunj.. kunj wss sitting quietly.. gazing out of the window...

Manik sighs n about to go at that time kunj spoke

kunj - chup chup k dekhne ki zarurat nhi h... ye MANIK SINGHANIYA ka nhi KUNJ SINGHANIYA ka room h... or vo sabke liye open h... yaha kabhi bhi koi bhi aa jaa skta h...

Manik emberassed that he got caught but then he enterd...

Kunj - umm kuch kehna tha apko

manik ego was blocking his mouth but still mouth but still he spoke

manik - umm.. ab tum kese ho??

Kunj smiled and hugged manik... manik stiffs as usual..

kunj smiles - Thanks bhai... thank you .. u saved my life...

Manik then stepp back - nhi meine kuch ni kia vo to me... bas ..

Manik noticed kunj was enjoying his emberassed face

Manik angrily - kiaa.. ghur kia rahe ho tum..?? or haan lift kharab h pata ni tha tumhe... or jab phas he gye tha to inform ni kr skte tha kia kisiko???

kunj pouts - Karna to chahta tha ap he ne baat ni suni meri...

Manik guilty yes it was indeed true he didnt listen

Manik - i... vo...

kunj with lil tears - bhai u know... it was so dark out there... mera itna dam ghut ra tha... i thought i will die... or koi mere bare me jaan bhi ni payega

Manik shocked he felt like slapping kunj for saying all this.. but can he do that...

kunj smiled - aap ye soch re ho na ye sab me apko kyu bata ra hu?? haan.. ye baate me mom dad se bhi share kar sakta tha but kiaa nhi.. because i know they will get angry .. isliye apse kar ra hu.. bcz mujhe ptaa h insab baato se aapko koi FARK nhi parega...

Manik dnt know why but he felt pain...

manik thinks- is he trying to say ki iske jine yaa marne se mujhe koi fark ni parega?

Kunj - Apke liye me koi important person ni hu na ... isliye...

Manik dont know why but this statemnt gave a stab in his heart...

At that time Anamika entered.. with food... kunj weeped his tears.. manik looked away...

Anamkka knew there must be some unusual conversation but she never comes between this brother...

Anamika - Kunj... ye lo beta breakfast chalo jaldi se finish kar lo .. or ajk din rest karlo baby aj universty jane ki koi zarurat nhi h..

Kunj - but mom.

Annu glared - i wont hear any kind of excuse u better do what i say..

kunj grimaced - but mom.. milk??? apko baccha dikhai deta hu kiaa me.. jo dudh le ayi...

annu - Ek din pi loge to bacche ni ban jaoge tum.. chup chap pio.. me tumhare papa ko breakfst deke ayi...

Annu left.. Manik saw all the scene which happens inside and then about to go.. but he saw kunj was throwing the milk in the dustbin..

Manik shocked n hold his hand.. kunj startled

Manik angrily - Ye kia kar re ho tum?

Kunj - Aree bhai.. ap na isme mat ao.. plzz ye dudh vudh mujhse piya ni jaega... plzz

Manik - ya right.. jab me tumhe kuch kehta hu.. to tum sunte ho?? nhi na.. par tum chahte ho ki tumhari baat har koi sune jabki tum khud kisiki baat ni sunte...

Kunj - Aree par... .

Manik holds the glass the put it near his lips before kunj could say anything he had to gulp the milk...

Kunj irritated - Bhai..

Manik made him drink the milk...

Kunj - wht the hell.. ese zabardasty koi pilata h vo bhi bimar admi se?? hadd hoty h... agar meri chinta krte ho to thora pyaar se bhi to kar sakte tha na

Manik rudelg - first of all mujhe tunhari koi chinta nhi h.. n secondly tum ye galatfemi to palna he mat ki tum mere bhai ho is nate meine kuch kia h.. meine ye sab isliye kia bcz tum humesha mere sath ese he karte ho..zabardasty i jzz let u taste the dose of ur own medicin..

Kunj emberassd n pouted .. manik left smartly not making him understand that he cares...

precap - Manik and Nandini stuck in locker room..

kunj and twinkle stuck im old library...

*** Ummm yaa today there is no manan and no twinj.. but i felt like this part was important.. so that i can potray Manik's character well... after today's episode i think u all can get a clear picture of how is manik n wht he feels for kunj.. .. he surely doesnt hate him..jzz he is misguided by his maasi so he cant analys between right and wrong..  hope today u all can understand.. but ya jab tak use khud realise ni hojata tab tak to kuch kar ni skte *****

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