EveZhang I did all the improvements u wanted and if u want to say anymore improvements for me to do just say them you draw anime a lot and well I love name but can really draw so anyways u had kinda of anime hair it looked like anime hair so I made it look more real

EveZhang should I erase the other side of the hair even though you showed me the example and the other side of the hair looked like that but should I do this

Okey here is my final piece of it I still need to shade some parts but it's ok

Now that looks better