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Book: 3:00 AM

Author: walkingecho

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Title (5/5): At first I was a little confused as to the relevancy but you made it very clear in the second chapter. I'm assuming that Kaylee and Rowan will continue to meet every night at 3:00 AM, and if this is the case, then the title is perfect.

Cover (3/5): Seems relevant to the story, although in honesty the picture looks like it was taken when the sun is rising rather than at 3:00 AM. Otherwise, I like the simplicity.

Summary (10/10): Does a great job of enticing readers without giving too much away. It's the perfect length and definitely makes me intrigued to learn more!

Plot (13/15): You had me dropping my jaw not even halfway through the first chapter. I love the twist of Kaylee having to pretend to be her twin sister to make her mother happy. I did not see it coming. The only thing I'm curious about is how her mother is unable to tell that she's Kaylee and not Kaitlyn. It sounds like the mother obviously prefers Kaitlyn, so wouldn't she be able to tell the two apart? Or is she so crazed and overcome with grief that she's convinced herself that Kaylee was the one who died? This may be something that you want to address at some point in your story to make it more realistic. I'm also intrigued by the concept of two lost kids meeting up every night to find their true selves. It seems like it's going to be a very beautiful and inspirational story.

Characters (10/10): It's difficult to determine exactly who the characters are in only two chapters but you've got a solid start. I like that Kaylee already seems different when she's outside the house as compared to when she's within it. Continue to make this apparent throughout the chapters and I think it'll be a great way of developing her character. Her connection with Rowan already seems strong and I like that they connected through Sylvia Plath. Your characters seem complex and you've done a good job of establishing the pain they feel. I'm especially intrigued by the conflict her father is going through and am interested to see where you take it.

Organization (4/5): The chapters are easy to get through and aren't too long or too short. I really like the picture headers you use for each chapter, although I'm confused about the chapter titles. It took me a little bit to realize that they are English numbers rearranged. Since you already have numbers in the header pictures, maybe instead you could title the chapters something relevant to what happens. For example, instead of "eno" it could be "Pretend" or "The Locket". Something along those lines.

Overall (45/50): Let me just say that I was super shocked when I saw on your account that you're only fourteen. I would have never guessed you were that young based on your writing. I'm super impressed! You've got good imagery and a really solid start to your story. I didn't see a lot that I would change within the first few chapters but my biggest recommendations for the future are: (1) to give some sort of explanation as to why her mom can't tell she's not actually Kaitlyn, and (2) to continue to emphasize the difference between Kaylee being Kaylee and Kaylee being Kaitlyn. But overall, you do a great job of hooking readers and I'm excited for updates!

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