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Review 19 // Michiko Takahashi

Another magical original character, this time by milkiipastel

My comments will be in bold

Basics and grounding /character information


Ahhhhhh I genuinely really like this character, she's so cute. Since you said you're going for the anime feel, I'm not going to tell you to go for natural looking stuff since this is an original universe and it's inspired by stuff like Little Witch Academia. Anime isn't exactly know for it's realistic appearances. Although, I recommend coming up with something unique in this universe since you read about an awful lot of series that have this same concept.

Relationships



All I can say here is make sure you build up on the relationships with these characters so that it helps shape your character into who she is and it makes sense.

Backstory





I don't have any issues with this backstory because it's very well thought out, I just suggest adding more details and really making it a fool proof background.

Other / stats

Oh damn, I like these stats, this is the first time I've seen a character have 0 as one of their stats, so good job on unique stats.

Final thoughts
I feel like I haven't said enough for this characters, but I'm not going to point out issues where there isn't any. With some small points of improvement, this character could be even better. There's not much for you to improve and this character is very well done, so good job!!

*My critiques are simply at your request and to help improve your character. It is not my intention to cause any offence and you of course do not have to listen to what I've said. This us all just a bit of fun and I apologise if I have done any kind of damage*

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