Client: sansutales

Reviewer: iburnrice

Thank you for giving me the chance to review your story. I apologize in advance if any of what will be said comes off as rude or hurtful. It was never my intention ❤️

Title and Book Cover - 3/5

The title "Deal 365: No Strings Attached" effectively communicates the story's premise; Deal 365 which implies a year long agreement, instantly sparking curiosity about what kind of treat the protagonists made, No Strings Attached hints at a romance or relationship that starts with an agreement of emotional detachment. Together the title is catchy and hints at most if not all of the elements used in the story.

However the title is a bit long. Its length and structure could be refined for stronger reader/market appeal.

For the book cover, it's not all bad. I don't agree with the font, and alignment. Having two characters face each other in the cover is not bad, because it aligns well with the "arranged" concept, evoking a sense of restrained connection. But we need something simple but eye catching and unique. The cover needs improvement.

Blurb - 3/5

The blurb is decent, but I'm never impressed with having such long blurbs, especially one that has discussions. But then again, it's sometimes fun to add them. What am I blabbering about? I'm talking about proper structuring, less ramblings. A short blurb with a clear picture of what one is about to read. The other extras could be added to an author's note.

Like the serious warning about no mature scenes in the book :)

and the tropes etc

Revised blurb:

"What if we just...go through with it for a year? Like a deal?"

Soya never expected that kind of proposal from a stranger. But when Raghav's powerful father forces them into a marriage of convenience, she agrees –just one year, no strings attached.

Two strangers. One contract. Zero expectations.

Raghav and Siya couldn't be more different –she's fire and thunder, he's sunshine and calm. But as sparks fly and secrets rise, their deal begins to look less like an arrangement and more like fate.

Can they survive the truth that lies beneath their pasts? When the year ends, will they walk away –or will they discover a reason to stay?

Plot Creativity and Originality - 7 /10

"Deal 365: No Strings Attached" presents a familiar yet emotionally resonant premise: two strangers, Raghav and Siya, are forced into a one-year marriage by external pressures, only to find themselves emotionally entangled despite the "no strings attached" rule. This plot taps into a classic romantic trope—the contract marriage—which is well-loved in both traditional romance novels and modern Wattpad fiction. On its own, the setup isn't groundbreaking, but it offers a strong emotional framework that readers gravitate toward.

What enhances the creative potential here is how the trope is handled. The reversal of typical roles -"Sunshine Boy × Thunder Girl" - adds a fresh layer of characterization. Instead of the usual cold male lead and sweet female protagonist, you've flipped the expectations, which is both engaging and fun. The mention of "Calm × Chaos" implies a dynamic contrast between personalities that can drive both conflict and chemistry.

Additionally, the presence of a ruthless father orchestrating the union introduces a darker, more manipulative undertone. This pushes the story beyond a fluffy romance and into dramatic territory, making room for suspense, power struggles, and family secrets. The vague allusion to a dark past and buried secrets adds intrigue, giving readers something deeper to anticipate beyond the romance arc.

While the story concept is not entirely original in premise, your execution and character dynamics breathe new life into it. The emotional stakes, slow-burn development, and inner conflict potential make this a compelling narrative for romance fans.

Character Development - 6/10

As far as I've read, the characters are developing nicely. Our male lead is learning to step up for himself. We're told he's always a scared cat, and his past questions always justify this. But seeing how he behaves later on, I'd say that's a development. I don't much to criticize here.

Grammar and Story Flow - 6/10

The only thing I'll say here is, you need to review your work. There are few grammatical mistakes, and some scenes need more action. Overall the story flow is natural.

Overall Enjoyment and Engagement - 7/10

Overall the book was a nice read. I had fun slowly getting to know the characters. There are twists and turns, but they were engaging to read. Keep writing !