Client: Lanadelreygirlie

Reviewer: lantea-

🌹》Title, Cover, & Blurb

The title is capitalized correctly and fits the story. It also draws readers to the story. The cover is very pretty! It fits the story well and attracts readers to the book. The author's name is hard to read on the cover though. It blends in and it's very small. The blurb is a little long and the phrasing is hard to understand in some spots. Overall, it introduces the story pretty well and attracts readers.

🌹》Plot

The plot of the story is clear and easy to understand. It also draws readers in and is progressing at a good pace. Maya wonders when it will be her turn to find love and it's easy for readers to connect with her story. The exposition introduces the characters, world, and their situations well. I was a little nervous reading it since it was the second book in the series. The story was easy to understand though and could be read on its own. I suggest adding in some details about what happened in the first book though to give Maya's past more depth.

🌹》Characters

The characters are introduced well in the story. Some of the characters could be described better. Yash is described well and it's easy to picture his appearance. There aren't really any descriptions of the other characters though. Be sure to include their descriptions throughout the chapters. The characters' personalities are shown well throughout the chapters. I enjoyed the banter between the characters. Maya and Dev's sibling banter was well done and it's easy for the readers to see how much they care about one another (even though Dev can annoy Maya quite a bit lol). I also liked the banter between Yash and Maya in the locker room. The lovey-dovey talk between Sam and Ryan can get a little much. I know that's how their characters are, however, it just gets a little repetitive.

🌹》Grammar/Spelling

There were a few spelling and grammar errors in the chapters, however, it wasn't anything major that drew attention from the story. I commented on the lines what they were as you requested in your form.

🌹》Writing Style

The writing style is consistent throughout the chapters and it's very well done. The descriptions of the scenery were very vivid. It was easy to picture and I could imagine myself there with the characters. Be careful your descriptions aren't repetitive though as there were a few spots where they were very similar. For example, near the end of the prologue, you have two similar descriptions of the scenery near each other and say that they hint at the possibility of new beginnings. The phrasing was easy for readers to understand and it flowed very well. You do an excellent job showing the readers what's happening in the story!

🌹》Enjoyment

The story was enjoyable and I would read on! I want to see how Maya's story plays out and if she finds love.

🌹》Overall

Overall, the story was a very enjoyable read! The plot draws readers in and makes them want to keep reading to see how Maya's story evolves. It's easy for the readers to connect and identify with Maya. The characters' personalities are shown well throughout the chapters and their banter is entertaining. Be sure you include descriptions of all the characters though so the readers know what they look like. The scenery is described very well in the story. Be careful your descriptions aren't repetitive though. Good luck with your story!