Client: shytabby

Reviewer: Kailucy

Cover: 4/10

The cover isn't great. It's kinda bland. The font isn't very readable. The image is okay but the rest of it kinda clashes.

Title: 8/10

The title is fine. It goes well with the book.

Blurb: 8/10

The blurb is fine. It introduces the characters and plot. The questions asked add to the potential readers interest. There were a few lines didn't make sense at first. Overall, the blurb is fine.

Character: 8/10

The characters are dynamic. I think you're doing a good job at making them interesting. I read the first five chapters and I already feel a connection to them. Shelley in particular stood out, it was a smart idea to make her the main character. She just popped off the page and made me want to read more to find out more about her.

Plot: 18/20

The plot was engaging. I do feel like some of it moved very quickly, but it's not a bad thing. I wasn't expecting them to see each other again so soon. Then him practically stalking her was a little red flag ngl, but overall the plot has my interest. I hope to continue reading but I can't promise cause life is lifeing. Overall, the plot is paced well, a little fast in parts but then it slows down a bit, making it the perfect mix.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 9/10

There were a lot of mistakes but in chapter one "Adams" didn't need an apostrophe. In chapter four there are two misplaced quotation marks. It's the paragraph after the mention of Mr. Agyapong's son joining the US Navy.

The vocabulary was good.

Enjoyment: 9/10

I enjoyed reading this a lot. The characters were interesting and I found the plot fun to read.

Overall: 84/100

Overall, I think you're on the right track. The plot is a little too fast for me in a few places but that's me. I know many who prefer fast paced beginnings. The characters really carry the story and the writing is amazing. I will say the main thing about the fast paced part is that I wasn't expecting after chapter one. Chapter one was slower and setting everything up and then it seemed to just randomly speed up. Which once again isn't bad just took me a second to get used to. Despite my few critiques I want to end with: Keep writing! You're doing great!