Reviewer: ceo_kjinnie
Written by: taetebts

Before we start I am a sucker for paranormal stories and when I found out this was one I read it right away! And taking a first glance at your book I knew it was definitely going in my library.

➼COVER (10/10)
Wow. Just wow. The cover is so attractive and I’m sure people will definitely be reading the story once they see the cover. Also the banners were really pretty too, your friend really did an amazing job making them.
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➼TITLE (9/10)
Not the most unique title, since there are many books (in Wattpad) with the same title but I like it since it goes well with the plot.

➼BLURB (9/10)
I like how the blurb gives the idea that it's going to be a paranormal fiction but it lacked something, I felt there was nothing in the blurb that would draw the readers to read more.

➼PLOT (10/10)
Nothing to say, it just blew my mind while reading it .

➼ORIGINALITY (10/10)
Originality is always appreciated. I’m pretty sure I’ve never read a book like this before!

➼ WRITING STYLE (9/10)
You have a really unique writing style that makes a good impact on the readers but it needs touching up somewhere. I read some comments in your story and many people didn't understand the ending, including me. I didn't understand it the first time reading it so it’d be nice if you could write an explanation chapter for them.

➼CHARACTER AND STORY DEVELOPMENT (10/10)
Jimin’s character was portrayed so beautifully that it makes you feel his pain just by reading it. There’s not much to say about the story development since it is a one shot but the flow was good.

➼SETTING/WORLDBUILDING (10/10)
I really admire the way you didn't give off the fact that Jimin is in a Mental Asylum. I think it was worded very well in a way that confuses you yet gives you the idea of what is going on.

➼GRAMMAR & SPELLING (9/10)
You have a magnificent vocabulary. There were a few grammatical errors towards the end of the story but a single proofreading should be enough to fix that.

➼ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT (10/10)
I loved reading it so much that I hate it's a oneshot. It’s fairly engaging and I’m sure other readers will enjoy it too.

➼OVERALL (96/100)
In conclusion, it was so much fun reading your book. Thank you so much for choosing me as your reviewer. Have a good day/night Bee.
                        ~Ana