Reviewer: Junective
Written by: SherryRS

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story.

It was a great story and I enjoyed it.

❥ Title: Great title, it matched well with the plot. It hints a bit from the story plot, which is actually great.

❥ Cover: Really nice cover, it haves off a killer vibe and is well connected to the story concept. The colours went together well and the title was visible. Good cover.

❥ Blurb: The blurb was well written, especially the quote which gave a lot of mystery and it was a great one alone. The blurb will surely draw some mystery/thriller readers.

❥ Storyline: Great storyline, the mystery and the way you have written made people sympathise with the killer and turned on a lot. Ending every chapters perfectly with some small, small cliffhangers has managed to keep the reader at the edge of their seat. A great story after all.

❥ Characters: The characters very well developed. You have captured their feelings well. And have given then unique and relatable personalities. A good motive was given to the killer, which was actually a smart and to think about it reveals a lot about his past self, more likely.

❥ Grammar and punctuations: The grammar was on point and the punctuation were given correctly. But the pace of the story was overly fast, so I recommend you to slow down the way things go. And in the first chapter, I think you should write it more descriptively, so the readers could actually feel the killer. It was too short and fast, so I recommend you to do it like maybe explaining the killing thing or you can go like, 'I hit him in the chest just like he did to him' or 'I stood there and stared at my art work in  complete satisfaction feeling so great'.
Like this you can make your story a bit more descriptive so the readers could visualise and connect to the characters more.

❥ Conclusion: The story was really good and well written apart from the fast pace which could be slowed down by adding more description and some more small events but not too much, so that the it could be balanced. Everything was really good and this book has a lot of potential, a great book overall.

Best Wishes