Reviewer : Junective
The Sage Of Death by hikari_ichijou

Thank you so much for giving me the chance to review your story.
It was a great story and I enjoyed it.

❥ Title: The title was great and fit well with the story.

❥ Cover: The cover looked as if you took a picture and drew the title with your hand. This is what I felt when I first saw. The font in a cover is very important as it has the power to make any good cover to bad and maybe bad to good. So I request you to change your cover as the cover is the first thing that attracts your reader. If you want then you can order from the graphic shop available in this account. The cover should be changed or at least the font should be.

❥ Blurb: The blurb instead of giving a sense of mystery and enticing me to read more instead it just confused me. I think the blurb could be longer and something could be added like the characters name, personality or how her life is.

❥ Storyline: The storyline however was good but note that the cover, title and blurb is the first thing an author should take care of while the plot is the main thing. The chapter were ended greatly but some cliffhangers could be added so that the readers will be enticed to read more.

❥ Characters: The characters were introduced well but they weren't portrayed that greatly. So I think you should work on it.

❥ Grammar and punctuations: A sentence should begin with capital letter. Whenever you add 'I' in between a sentence keep it capital too.

Commas should be added along with full stops. And there was a lot of grammatical errors. So, I highly recommend you to read other Wattpad books so not only it helps you in your writing, it will also help you in finding your writing style.

❥ Conclusions: The story plot was great but due to a lot of issues. I suggest you to completely read the book and edit it briefly or use the help of an editor. Also, If my words hurt you in anyway, then I am very sorry and I just wanted to help you become a better writer. And with that I end my review here.

Best Wishes